From b26155ea71038874d6c958431b945b0cbe5b460d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Puff Beaddy Date: Mon, 8 Jun 2026 15:16:18 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] =?UTF-8?q?fix(sunday-lawn-mowers):=20Mississauga=20?= =?UTF-8?q?=E2=86=92=20Oakville=20per=20Tee's=20lore=20correction?= MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Tee corrected origin (2026-06-08): French (Annecy), based in Oakville — not French-Canadian, not Mississauga. Patching V2 lyric + README lore beats list. V2 line: 'The whole of Mississauga humming its Sunday hymn.' → 'The whole of Oakville humming its Sunday hymn.' (Loses two syllables — 'Mississauga' is 4 syllables, 'Oakville' is 2 — but the free-verse half-chant scans fine in the new shorter form. Sibling line 'Hockey nets pushed to the curb like cellos at rest' keeps the Canadian framing intact.) README lore beats list updated. Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.7 (1M context) --- tracks/sunday-lawn-mowers-symphony/README.md | 2 +- tracks/sunday-lawn-mowers-symphony/lyrics.md | 2 +- 2 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/tracks/sunday-lawn-mowers-symphony/README.md b/tracks/sunday-lawn-mowers-symphony/README.md index 10b8992..46daba9 100644 --- a/tracks/sunday-lawn-mowers-symphony/README.md +++ b/tracks/sunday-lawn-mowers-symphony/README.md @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ Same lyrics, three production lenses. Pick one to take to Suno — or render all **Bead-click foley** is preserved across all three styles (MoBead's signature). ## Lore beats woven in -- **Mississauga** ("the whole of Mississauga humming its Sunday hymn") — V2 +- **Oakville** ("the whole of Oakville humming its Sunday hymn") — V2 - **SAUL-TEE under the tarp** in the driveway, workshop door shut on the Sabbath — V3 - Quiet, single nods. The neighborhood is the protagonist; the workshop is part of the chorus. diff --git a/tracks/sunday-lawn-mowers-symphony/lyrics.md b/tracks/sunday-lawn-mowers-symphony/lyrics.md index 8848b03..5b33398 100644 --- a/tracks/sunday-lawn-mowers-symphony/lyrics.md +++ b/tracks/sunday-lawn-mowers-symphony/lyrics.md @@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ Percussion comes free — somebody catches a stone, clatter-clatter-ping, the blade complains and forgives. Ice cream truck two streets away playing its tinny loop. Hockey nets pushed to the curb like cellos at rest. -The whole of Mississauga humming its Sunday hymn. +The whole of Oakville humming its Sunday hymn. [CHORUS] Sunday lawn mowers symphony,