fix(motherbead): apply Oakville edits — V1 lyric + README lore table
Tee corrected origin: French (Annecy), based in Oakville. Patching Motherbead's Mississauga refs (V1 line + README lore table row). V1 line: 'Mississauga hum outside.' → 'Cold Oakville hum outside.' (Added 'Cold' to preserve syllable feel and reinforce the Oakville-winter framing — Annecy-to-Oakville is a snowier homecoming than Annecy was.) README lore table row updated. Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.7 (1M context) <noreply@anthropic.com>
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@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ The twin-crafts metaphor: **bead on thread = bolt on chassis = solder on trace.*
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| Tee asleep upstairs | V1, V2, CH, V3, BRIDGE, FINAL CH, OUTRO |
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| SAUL-TEE (the wagon, 4 wheels) | V1, V3 + every CH |
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| Mississauga (the driveway) | V1 |
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| Oakville (the driveway) | V1 |
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| The credit card (silent third hand) | CH, FINAL CH |
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| The AI fleet (cam, hud, uwb, nav, follow-tee, ar, max, merge) | V2 (all named) |
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| Gitea issues bickering | V2 |
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@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ ARTIST: MoBead
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[VERSE 1]
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Kitchen lamp. One bulb. One bead between my fingers.
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Mississauga hum outside. The driveway holds its breath.
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Cold Oakville hum outside. The driveway holds its breath.
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Tee is asleep upstairs. I can hear the house exhale.
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Under the tarp, the wagon waits — four wheels, one quiet name.
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SAUL-TEE. Patient as a pew.
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