Merge pull request 'fix(track/aeon): strip artist names + trim production notes to 954 chars' (#12) from track/aeon into main
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**Artist:** MoBead
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**Track:** Aeon
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**Reference:** Snow (Hey Oh) — Red Hot Chili Peppers, Stadium Arcadium 2006
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TITLE: Aeon
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ARTIST: MoBead
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GENRE/STYLE: Alternative rock, RHCP Stadium Arcadium era, Snow (Hey Oh) structure
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GENRE/STYLE: Alternative rock, funk-rock, stadium build
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BPM: 104
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KEY: D major (acoustic fingerpicking in Drop D; verse melody sits on the relative minor)
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LENGTH: 4:00–4:30
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INSTRUMENTATION:
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- Acoustic guitar: nylon-ish steel-string, fast 16th-note fingerpicking ostinato (Frusciante's
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Snow pattern — thumb bass note + alternating index/middle on treble strings), enters INTRO
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alone and drives the entire track underneath everything
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- Electric guitar: clean Stratocaster single-coil, slight compression, enters on V1 bar 5
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with sparse chord stabs; melodic lead fills in bridge and outro build
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- Bass: melodic, prominent, sits slightly forward in the mix — follows kick drum but adds
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Flea-style fills between phrases; clean funk tone with mid-range presence
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- Drums: Chad Smith feel — rimshot on 2 and 4, hi-hat driving 8ths, kick on 1 and the "and"
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of 3; not busy, locked tight; snare is dry and immediate, not washed in reverb
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- Vocal harmonies: second vocal a major third above on the chorus "Aeon" hook; wide stereo
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spread L+R, center voice dry, outer harmonies with light plate reverb
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- Outro chant stack: 6–8 vocal layers multitracked, alternating pan positions, some dry,
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some with subtle room reverb — each layer enters offset by ~half a bar
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AMBIANCE: Outdoor light through motion — city pavement under one wheel, open air, forward lean.
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REFERENCE VIBE: Snow (Hey Oh) outro chant energy into stadium-fill. One wheel, crowd watching.
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VOICE — match as close as possible to Anthony Kiedis in Snow (Hey Oh):
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REGISTER: Mid-high tenor, chest voice dominant. Comfortable pocket D4–A4; the "say oh" peaks
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reach B♭4 with an easy, unstrained reach. Never sounds like he's pushing.
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TONE: Warm with a slight wood-smoke grain — not breathy, not polished. Nasal resonance sits
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forward in the mask (not throaty). The roughness is organic, not performed.
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DELIVERY STYLE: Speech-melody hybrid. Rhythm is the primary carrier; pitch is implied, then
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landed on key syllables rather than held precisely through each note. Syllables tumble
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and blur into each other — "come-to-decide" runs almost as one breath with internal
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inflection. Think of it as the words being pushed out by a river, not placed.
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VERSE FEEL: Intimate, slightly conversational volume. Close-mic'd, you hear the mouth.
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Consonants are soft — no hard attacks. Vowels lead. Melody is felt in the body before
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it's heard in the pitch.
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CHORUS FEEL: Opens up noticeably — more air, more volume, jaw drops on the "A" of "Aeon."
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The open "oh" vowel on every hook end (say oh, stay oh, way oh) is wide-mouthed,
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free, almost gospel-call. No strain, effortless fullness — the feeling of a crowd
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that's already singing it with him.
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VIBRATO: Natural, light, only emerges on notes sustained a half-beat or longer. Short
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passing notes have none. Never applied deliberately — it appears when the phrase
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needs it.
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PHRASING: Breaths taken mid-phrase at momentum-points, not at line ends. The run-on
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feel is intentional — adds urgency and makes the listener feel like they're inside
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the thought as it forms.
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DOUBLES: In verse, Kiedis subtly doubles his own vocal at the unison (or close to it,
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with slight pitch drift between takes — no auto-tune, no pitch correction). In the
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chorus the harmony vocal sits a major third above, wide-panned.
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OUTRO CHANT: The Snow outro chant model — Kiedis multitracked 6–8 times, each
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pass with a slightly different energy (some leaning forward, some pulling back),
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panned across the stereo field. Some layers drop into a light falsetto/head voice
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register an octave up. Starts sparsely and layers accumulate until the sound is a
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full single-voice choir, then strips back to one dry voice on the final "Aeon."
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EMOTIONAL QUALITY: Open, yearning, communal. Not sad, not ecstatic — earnestly in
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the middle. The feeling of something that frees you that you want to share before
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you can explain why.
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SUNO PROMPT:
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Red Hot Chili Peppers style Snow Hey Oh, alternative rock Stadium Arcadium era,
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fast 16th-note fingerpicked acoustic guitar D major continuous ostinato, clean
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electric Stratocaster single-coil stabs, melodic Flea-style bass prominent in mix,
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dry tight rimshot drums Chad Smith feel, male tenor vocal warm grainy speech-melody
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Anthony Kiedis inflection, rhythmic tumbling syllables, open-mouth gospel-call chorus,
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building chant outro 6 vocal layers stacking wide stereo, 104 BPM, no reverb wash on
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verses, outdoor open-air feeling, one wheel, forward motion
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STRUCTURE:
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0:00 — INTRO: acoustic fingerpicking solo, ~20 bars, electric enters bar 12
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0:22 — VERSE 1: close-mic vocal, intimate, bass and drums lock in bar 2
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0:54 — PRE-CHORUS: slightly more open, harmony hint
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1:02 — CHORUS x2: full band opens up, harmonies wide, "Aeon" gospel-call
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1:30 — VERSE 2: same as V1 energy, bass adds fills
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2:02 — PRE-CHORUS
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2:10 — CHORUS x2
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2:38 — BRIDGE: electric lead guitar, chant layers begin one at a time (1→3 layers),
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drums pull back to rim only, bass holds low drone
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3:08 — OUTRO BUILD: all layers stack, drums return full, acoustic still anchoring,
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each "Aeon" call opens wider until 3:50 strip — final single voice, dry, "Aeon."
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4:00 — END
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KEY: D major
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VOICE: Warm-grain mid-high tenor, speech-melody, syllables tumble-blur; wide-mouth "oh" gospel call on chorus; close-mic intimate verses; vibrato on held notes only; harmony third above wide-panned; outro 6-layer chant stacks wide-stereo, strips to single dry voice.
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INSTRUMENTATION: 16th-note fingerpicked acoustic ostinato (thumb bass + alternating treble), single-coil electric sparse stabs and lead fills, melodic bass prominent funk fills, dry rimshot drums locked pocket.
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AMBIANCE: City pavement under one wheel, open air, crowd watching, forward motion.
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REFERENCE VIBE: Outro chant cascade into stadium-fill.
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STRUCTURE: 0:00 intro | 0:22 V1 | 0:54 pre | 1:02 Ch×2 | 1:30 V2 | 2:10 Ch×2 | 2:38 bridge+chant 1→3 | 3:08 outro stack | 3:50 single voice | 4:00 end
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